Tuesday, 30 November 2010

cold, grey leaden sky 
falls to disrupt into snow 
so we walk in clouds
random word: disrupt
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9 comments:

  1. beginningpoetry3 December 2010 at 00:44

    Very nice Haiku. I especially like the final line. - bill cook

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  2. ocdbloggergirl3 December 2010 at 14:52

    Truly one of the best haikus I've ever read, really enjoyed.

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  3. Ramesh Sood4 December 2010 at 09:26

    Hi,

    I love reading and writing haikus.. enjoyed the walk in clouds with you.. well done..

    Do visit to see some of my haikus too..

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  4. Purvi5 December 2010 at 17:20

    Awesome! makes me wonder, how U could bring this about!

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  5. DeLi13 December 2010 at 16:33

    nice way to look at such pure flakes!

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  6. Jingle13 December 2010 at 16:43

    powerful writing...

    A+

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  7. lynnaima13 December 2010 at 17:51

    I like! :)
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/my-poetic-man/

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  8. Kristen Haskell13 December 2010 at 20:38

    I have to agree with OCDblogger excellent Haiku

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  9. jessicasjapes14 December 2010 at 11:47

    Like the image of snow as clouds - a novel way to describe it. Great!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/ice-cream/

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