Monday, 16 May 2011

waking kiss

left over
from an
early
night
random word: early
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24 comments:

  1. ayala zarf11 March 2012 at 10:32

    sweet.... :)

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  2. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Thanks Ayala, I don't usually post these on dVerse.

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  3. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Hi Jannie, yes they hopefully work together

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  4. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Hi Elizabeth, thus praised am I

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  5. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Thanks, It was fun and I learned as well.

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  6. Gay Cannon11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Ah I know what an "early night" is--not all my compatriots do though. Glad you had a morning "dessert" ;-)

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  7. Peter11 March 2012 at 10:32

    The painting is intriguing in its use of colour - cold and warmth? Your words do it justice. Great five lines... // Peter.

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  8. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Hi, Peter, Yes the painting was a real find.

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  9. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Now Gay, what are you saying LOL.

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  10. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Good for you and glad to have helped.

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  11. hedge witch11 March 2012 at 10:32

    The best kind. And a most restfully sensuous haiku. I love the colors and forms in the painting as well.

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  12. Jannie Funster11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Short, sweet and says a lot.

    I do like the painting a lot.

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  13. Pat Hatt11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Aww those are nice ones to remember. Well said.

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  14. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Thanks Pat, this is my illustrated haiku blog so different from my usual poetry

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  15. claudia11 March 2012 at 10:32

    uuuhh nice...this is beautiful and romantic...like the painting as well

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  16. claudia11 March 2012 at 10:32

    and thanks again john for all the great comments on the ghazals - this was just awesome stuff - thank you

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  17. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Thanks Claudia, I like trying to match words and image

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  18. Nara Malone11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Aww..soft and romantic. I feel refreshed.

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  19. sometimesg11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Sweet ~

    I posted the Ghazal- like poem anyway. Thanks for all your inputs ~

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  20. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Thanks Nora, glad to have helped!

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  21. Rosemary Nissen-Wade11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Perfect!

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  22. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Hi Joy thanks, its the fusion of words and image I'm after

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  23. John @bookdreamer11 March 2012 at 10:32

    Hi Rosemary, well thanks so time to give up writing then!

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  24. elizabeth young11 March 2012 at 10:32

    How precious this is!

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